October's Warning

October's warning

 

 

the chill of you

yet the thrill of you

 

icicle tongue warms to mine

together a melting

humid breeze embraced

 

we drift,

you try to be so cool

but underneath the snowfall

the ground is a soft heart

 

and we are like unaccustomed grass

pleading for the rain of love.

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/26/16

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

Seasonal analogies are always so gorgeous. Having lived up in the north I can relate, I do however love the flip side of seasons her in the Southern Hemisphere.

Though the chill can be rather lovely beneath a sunny sky. Lovely job j. R x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Rach.

j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I anticipate October's chill as somewhat of a thrill. It's a transitional month, when we begin to cocoon ourselves, like the grass underneath the crusts of snow.

Beautiful analogy here, Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelly...

j.