First Round

First Round

 

 

heart rate spiked

like the punch

 

in the gut i felt 

when your eyes met mine

 

you were a knockout,

and i gladly met the canvas

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/11/16

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

Tongues get tied worse than traffic. You're always giving me the incentive I need...good work, Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kelly...

j.

[Jamestown]

Very sweet sentiment and enjoyed the
Metaphor, can't wait till I meet my next ko:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jamestown...hope your ko comes soon...:))))

[Drcicarlo]

Ahh this is fun! Reminds me too much of high school and first year of college. A tipsy colored canvas is almost always alluring. Great job Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Erica...

j.