love lies bleeding

love lies bleeding

bulletproof heart,

yet you had those damn darts

that penetrate a cop's armor

and i never even wore a badge

just the blue.

erin-cilberto

8/27/16

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

Ouch. Love can really sting when you don't have the right armor and the other party has all the right weapons.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, KL...

j.

[Lily Finch]

You are right KL Goode ...

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed this poem. You said a handful in so few words. Some woman carry heavy bullets. Thank you Jacob for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Coyote,

j.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Lord of mad men]

good very good> nice job!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you,

j.

[WithinTheHeart]

Amazing write. Imagery is potent...and your expression, in a few words is superb.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, WithinTheHeart,

j.

[ranscan]

Nice imagery, as usual I applaud your ability to put so much in so few lines, and still pull so much from the mind and heart of the reader.
Like sun kissed stone, from title to the last word, it hits hard and fast, and yet has a warmth that somehow leaves one feeling touched.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, ranscan,

j.

[Jamestown]

I agree with Poppy, we can be penetrate no matter how
much we try to protect ourselves, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jamestown.

j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

The cop kinda like the dragon ..wise and worthy but vulnerable and real all the same. That soft spot right under the vest...love always penetrates! I ve always had a thing for blue:)lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Queenie,

j.

[Ruth]

No matter how much we protect ourselves there is always a weak spot, being the heart...articulate to the point as always Jacob :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Poppy,

j.

[θεά]

Sharp piece of writing Jacob. Gets the message sent across in brevity.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Mallika,

j.

[andrew mitchell]

When your defenses are down the broken heart is inevitable one day! Should always wear your heart on your sleeve they say but in this case the armour doesn't have one! . A good write as always J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, no sleeve.....thank you, andrew.

j.