shopping in your attic

shopping in your attic

in your aged mind

a shadow of what you knew

eclipses my store

erin-cilberto

8/1/16

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Love it!! Good one Jacob.....................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you Mark...

j.

[Papaya]

Memories, like old records, treasures waiting to be found. I like this and it makes me think of good memories.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, like old records, ah someone who remembers vinyl...

thanks, Ana.
j.

[Monica Chen]

I love the concept of "shopping" in an attic...With a play on words, an attic is somewhere you store either old or yet-to-be-used/unneeded items only for you to come back later and spend hours picking through various objects and remembering their value again

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Monica.

j.

[Paul Bell]

The attic. The final resting place for yesterday's thoughts. Deep poem.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Paul.
j.

[Bacchus]

so hard, sad.
guessing this is about your dad.
well done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Bacchus...

j.

[barleygirl]

I really love this message . . . I feel my attic contains quite a bit more than most, even not remembering a fraction of what's there.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for sharing, barleygirl.

j.

[Gray]

There's an emptiness in others that are too much for us to bear, whether from sickness, old age or indifference.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Grey...
j.