no reserve

no reserve

 

 

philanthropist heart

gives away love too freely

empties his account

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/1/16

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Let me join and celebrate our bankruptcy together!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, please join in....thanks Al.

j.

[V]

A small, heartfelt one. I know about that condition. Well said.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Vanessa...

j.

[ranscan]

An interesting premise contained in so few words, I respect the idea even if I don't share the conclusion. I admire those whom handle well the limitations of this poetic form, this rare skill is well displayed here.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind and honest review, ranscan--

j.

[redzone]

it's a broke a*s senryu Jacob... lol well as most art and artists, we are broke until we die even though we have given our hearts... another wonderful poetic expression Jacob...

redzone

[jacob erin-cilberto]

can't take it with you, they say....but the voice dies when we do...and hopefully the sound of it will live on through our poetry..

thanks again, my friend.

j.

[aLittlePain]

So much in three lines!

I call that a blessed life.

Rach x

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Rach.

j.

[Papaya]

Love this one Jacob.
The bleeding heart nourishes everyone else but itself.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Ana...

j.

[Jon Roggie]

I like this minimalist style you are using. You can only give all of it away, and then wonder.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jon.

j.

[Mary]

Beautiful write! Not sure if I agree with the philosophy, but it's beautiful

[jacob erin-cilberto]

many would disagree, i am sure...thank you for your read and honest words, Mary.

j.

[Lyn Anderson]

Sometimes we feel as though we have nothing left when we give so much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we do...thank you my friend.

j

[Lydia Shutter]

I think, though, even when a heart has given all it can, it suddenly finds more to give. You have packed a lot of meaning into three lines here, Jacob. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lydi...

j.