and thus it is written

and thus it is written

 forgone conclusion

you would be my beginning

my middle, my end

erin-cilberto

4/27/16

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh how i love the irony and bit of word play at the "end"! ... love it! the only luck i have is bad luck eh!? :{
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, my friend..

j.

[AYVID N]

The poet seems resigned...as if he gave up fighting the tides. It could be that Destiny throws him back into the same vortex again and again...It could also be that the heart is stubborn, not willing to give up on that one, much coveted and awaited love. An amazing write, so identifiable.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, DIVYA...

you are always so encouraging with your words of my poems....

j.

[Sami Khalil]

Fate or destiny to be apart and long for each other due to many reasons. Sad but excellent...:)...........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Sami.

j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ....:)))))

[ms. barrie]

compelling write that vividly paints a portrait of
a heart that is always haunted by a long ago soul mate.
tho' short...your incredible weaving of words...akin to wizardry
just astounds me. this lingers within one's mind.
Thank you for sharing
~ X - barrie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind review, barrie...

j.