and thus it is written

and thus it is written

 forgone conclusion

you would be my beginning

my middle, my end

erin-cilberto

4/27/16

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

To be written into the script with such clarity. Hmmm, not sure if that is good or bad.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

probably not good....:)

thank you,KL

[CD Campbell]

This could be a positive. When I read this, I thought this could be about anything. I read "you" as not a physical creation, but as the poetical muse that has been with us since birth. A little dramatic on my end, but oh well. Another great write. CD

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like dramatic and appreciate you words, CD...

j.

[Matching Socks]

Things unsaid, we think we don't have to, but we do.
To be someone's everything, what a great expectation.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Ana.

j.

[Fran Marie]

A declaration of deep love within this senryu, so well written..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Fran Marie.

j.

[Nisreen]

Funny how the things we assume written
are never written
or spoken

they are assumed
once that conclusion is reached

we remind ourselves to write them
because they have taken place in our soul ......

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so insightful are your comments...thank you Nisreen...

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

This is like a depth charge, exploding when it reaches 1,000 feet of depth. Wow!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you kind sir....

j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

That circle , how it winds around our finger in Golden bliss, runs around our heads in flowery dreams, creeps around our heart in disguise, and hangs so heavy around our necks until we are gone....only to blow around and begin again...hmmmmmmm... do any ever stray?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your review is better than the poem, Queenie...

thank you...
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Such an impact in these three lines! A soulmate....destined to be with that one special person. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, my friend.

j.

[...]

Ooooh the brevity.........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, lynn....

j.

[W.k.kortas]

Checks off all the boxes--taut and tight, finely executed wordplay, just the right tone. End stop, indeed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words,
j.