a lovely death

a lovely death

 

 

floating fearlessly

in your poison confection

tenders' selection

 

 

erin-cilberto

4/12/16

Reviews

[AYVID N]

Reminded me of the ants found dead in an overturned can of thick syrup. A willful suicide, they die in the stuff they love. So it is with love so overtly sweet. Much appreciated...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your insightful words, DIVYA.
j.

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome....

[Chris]

This one made me think
of the deliberate means
meanings seldom have...

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Chris...they are quite profound, as always...i appreciate your visits...read morethank you for your words, Chris...they are quite profound, as always...i appreciate your visits...

j.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Good haiku, sir. Alliteration in the first line, and then rhyming in the other two has adorned your work. A nice piece to read. 'Floating fearlessly'- a very accurate, concise and veracious description of the fate we all share in common.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you so much for your kind words, Vatsal...actually this is senryu...haiku deals strictly with nature...

i appreciate your visit...

j.

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

Thank you, sir, for adding to my knowledge.

[Country boy183798]

A fantastic work once again. Simple, but yet so complicated. Thank you for sharing it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words,
j.

[Karen]

Ah, the magnificence of a simple Haiku with meaning so profound the form loses its "simplicity". Great poem!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Karen...

j.

[Kirsty]

Nice when three lines can stimulate the mind. Enjoyed it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Kirsty...