No way your ink is ever dried up, my friend! Memories....we write about them a lot and yet they are a constant source of inspiration. Even the bad memories! "Yellowed vows in fragile crackle"...so powerful. Great one. Lydi**
Really...this is your idea of a dried inkwell, huh? I could teach you a thing or two about divorced wordage's and " yellowed vows in fragile crackle" haha A sorcerer, you are, to make poetic metaphor flow so easily from a dried up well of anything. And I love the title :)
dear Jacob, Blacked eyed Susans in meadows of
melodic memories of children stringing daisies
while lovers dance a swan song. Love is a gift to be
treasured in quiet moments of celebration...
truly a rhapsody of beauty and affection. Pat
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
"even in the quietest moments.." (supertramp)
thank you for your kind and poetic repl.. read more"even in the quietest moments.." (supertramp)
thank you for your kind and poetic reply, my friend.
One of my favorites of yours that I've read so far. Love the interwoven imagery between natural observations & writing references & heartbreak. As always, good alliteration & sensory word choices.
It a strange way I'm thinking of Sister Millburga, Milky, we fondly called her. The 5th & 6th grade, my downfall years, where she eclipsed the redundancy of her own mind by a milestone. Subsequently, I ventured off into gaga land occasionally punished for lack of attention and sent to the back of the room with a poetry book in hand. We had dry inkwells in the upper right corner of the desk. There was no symphony of learning here.
Regards,
Al
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
yes, those dry inkwells and the nuns....thank you for sharing that Al..
seems like the poetic subject could write nothing meaningful - he/she feels empty - no words are coming - there is a fade of a memory sound that once sang, until the sentiments/feelings collapsed
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..