Signing

Signing

 

 

 

good at reading lips

and your kisses told me so---

time for me to go

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

 

3/26/16

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Betty Evrett and Cher knew....it's all in his kiss...or her kiss as the case may be. When the emotions run cold, the kisses are somehow different. So much said in these three lines! Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, they did know didn't they? both versions good...thank you for your kind words, my friend...
read moreyes, they did know didn't they? both versions good...thank you for your kind words, my friend...

j.

[Ruth]

Damn, this is so cool on so many levels Jacob...always an absolute pleasure to read your poetry...it delves into the shelves of life and rips the covers of all books in a profound manner :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Poppy...

j.

[Lily Finch]

Wow bravo...nice short one......love to read short....
Enjoyed !!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lily...

j.

[Karen]

I love the way the Haiku make this simple poem so poignant. So sad when the goodbye kiss can be the coldest one...or the most ardent.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Karen.

j.

[Cryingkate]

ca, ca, ca, cold lips, sink puckered ships

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very true, Connie...very true.

[Dhaye]

Yes, some are good in reading signs. ( But some are good in assuming, too...wrong reading. Lol)
I feel sad about kiss of goodbye. Effective senryu though.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words and soft heart, Dhaye.

j

[highonwords]

the kiss of goodbye - the lines work very well with each other - i enjoyed reading it :)

regards,
steph

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, steph,
j.

[highonwords]

you're welcome, my friend :)

best,
steph

[Einstein Noodle]

well......reading sign is better than being blind I guess ..:} not sure what to say about this one ..its simply a very good senryu .. well foibled and playful .. nice one!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, E.....humor gets us through sometimes,.....

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it does sir ..

[...]

Ah, the kiss that says so long...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, lynn...:)))

[Nisreen]

Nothing like a woman that is that fast
in a good way

:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Nisreen...:))))