Cloud to Ground

Cloud to Ground

 

 

 

she is strong storms

and lightning reach

 

my heart is the tree

that wants to bend towards the bolt-age

of her intense voltage

 

and fall at her feet.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/23/16

Reviews

[Carolynn]

I'm not sure I like the idea of a woman wielding that much power over a man - you need to find a woman with much less voltage Jacob - one that doesn't leave burns ;)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's more the power of the fusion...:)))

i hear the thunder...and i hear what you say....thank you for your keen insight.

j.

[M. L. F.]

Aah... Intensity. I wish it was a word most men could truly comprehend... Simple, powerful, and soul bearing. Great work..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, M.L.
j.

[M. L. F.]

Anytime j. Thank you for the poetry...

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Beautifully communicated in brevity! A word picture of being "all in".

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Shimmerbliss...

j.

[Lyn Anderson]

Ah, to be thought of in this light -- electricity in the air -- love, excitement, danger -- as long as you don't get burned, it's all good.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, KL.
j.

[Bacchus]

Reread my Monthly Senryu when you feel like she is ;)

Exceptional teachers are exposed to this burn.
You can read people's hearts- so yours is going to be exposed.
Keep letting us hear your brilliance- we are learning so much on how to truly be poets.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are very kind with your words, Bacchus....thank you.

j.

[Bacchus]

Do you do courses on here?!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Lydia Shutter]

Great metaphor. Even when we know the lightning might strike us down, we seem to be drawn to it. I liked it. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have very few branches left...almost just a stick now...

thank you my friend...
read morei have very few branches left...almost just a stick now...

thank you my friend...

j.

[Zaynab1993]

Hi Jacob! this is a nice piece of poetry,I would like to tell you that you are a good poet,keep moving forward!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Zaynab.

j.

[Zaynab1993]

You're welcome,have a nice day

[andrew mitchell]

now that's love j lol reminds me of bugs bunny at the greyhound races falling in love with the electronic rabbit.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i remember that...funny one...those old warner bros. are the best...good slapstick for the kids, but clever dialogue for the adults ....

j.

[highonwords]

the spark, the dance, the strong surge of feelings :) nice write, jacob - as always!

regards,
steph

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, steph...
j.

[highonwords]

you're welcome, my friend :)

best,
steph