This is a really interesting analogy, pondering over it, it discloses a new sphere of love, it indeed hurts like a poisonous spider bite, toxic for years when it ruins you. Especially with your title, it's got this tinge of terror and melancholy at same time, with maddened violins playing in the background. It's a really interesting and refreshing read! Thank you for this!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you for your really kind review and insights into the workings of this piece, Crimson_ish...read morethank you for your really kind review and insights into the workings of this piece, Crimson_ish...
When love is fatal, it is not true love and certainly not worth it. I liked the title of this one. Some people are always complaining and make you think they are helpless....don't trust that violin. Lydi**
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
yes, that violin..or ....well...thank you, lydi....appreciate your words...
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..