mountain tones

mountain tones

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


mountain tones

 

 

i hope he can hear

wind chimes play on silver breeze

the song of his heart

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

3/6/16

© 2016 jacob erin-cilberto


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a gem - this poem reads like time stopped for a brief moment so he could listen to his heart

Posted 8 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

thank you, Steph.

j.
Starkly lovely imagery.
Heard the chimes; felt that breeze.
Amazing!


Posted 8 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

thank you, Jimmy...appreciate your kind words.

j.
Because of your writing he will be riding them down the mountain.

Yippee!

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago



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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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