anti-hero

anti-hero

 

 

 

i was meant to write

fastidious, rhyming couplets

with flagrant disdain

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/26/16

Reviews

[dan]

jacob, this was obviously (?) written with tongue firmly planted in cheek. Now, a novice poet could read this and think, "Hmmm...I should write senryu, they're so easy!" But I know for a fact that they are not easy at all. At least I find them difficult. I have ideas all the time, but they leave my scatter-shot thoughts before I can jot them down. And when I sit down and actually TRY to write one I hear crickets chirping (like on TV).
Comic intent intended or not, I love this piece. Up to your usual standards. take care...dan

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, i meant for a smile...and thank you for your response...senryu and haiku are really about the only form poems i ever do...i find them challenging and pretty intriguing...
thank again, my friend for the encouraging words.

j.