from the bottom of my heart

from the bottom of my heart

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto


from the bottom of my heart

 

 

firmly implanted

in a quicksand attraction

i look up at you

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/26/16

© 2016 jacob erin-cilberto


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remembering someone when in dire trouble is a sign of affection towards that person....very clear and well expressed sentiments here

Posted 8 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

thank you for your words, Sprint...

j.
careful Jacob, that quicksand is a fatal "attraction", and there is no Sharon Stone in this one...

redzone

Posted 8 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

but what about jeanne tripplehorn...is she around? ha ha.
thanks, Curt...
Sometimes it is impossible to look away even when you know there are red flags everywhere and you are drowning. Good one. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

thank you for your insightful words, lydi...

j.
Don't sink to deep you may never come up!

Regards,
Al

Posted 8 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

will keep that in mind, thank you, Al.

j.
Rosin Murphy ? "You dive in the shallow end, break your neck and never get up again" or something like that... Great write as always J.

b

Posted 8 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

thank you, bill...

j.
why does this poem give me that sinking feeling...badabing badaboom

Posted 8 Years Ago


Corset

8 Years Ago

you're asking me how to spell Cannoli? get outta here!
jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

oh yeah, it's like that...cannoli...i think...I better go to the mattresses-----
Corset

8 Years Ago

lol, ...............sweet dreams Jacob

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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