the bending of love

the bending of love

elasticity

stretching my patience so thin

yet the ties won't break

erin-cilberto

2/23/16

Reviews

[daninstockholm]

ahhh,, You have done so much with so little,, that is a true talent, my friend. I on the other hand have chosen to follow the beats, it seems, both are valid, of course. It should be a fun time following each other, don't you think? Well done!1

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, a fun time...i don't do haiku or senryu too often but pretty much the only form poems i write...thank you for your kind words, dan.

j.

[daninstockholm]

You're welcome!

[V]

Powerful, short poem. (Somehow I can totally relate to the things you share tonight).

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for relating Vanessa...that means a lot to me.

j.