under water blues

under water blues

 

 

 

after the storm of grief

 

left in your wake,

F.E.M.A took one look at my flooded cheeks

and declared my heart worthy

 

of disaster relief.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/3/16

Reviews

[θεά]

Brilliant use of epigrams.

Enjoy the way you manipulate the syntax to yield a delectable twist to the tale.
Commendable.

Best,
M.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Mallika...

j.

[Carolynn]

I would certainly regard that as a Federal emergency!! I'm glad relief has come - especially after such grief :) love this one Jacob :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Carolynn---
j.

[Lydia Shutter]

WOW....one of your best, Jacob. Disaster relief after a heartbreak.....love it. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Lydi..

j.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I hope her name wasn't Katrina. You might have to wait awhile for relief in that case. Very nice write as usual my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Fabian...appreciate your kind words,
j.

[Nisreen]

I love how this feels

Being worthy of relief
Sometimes this world we live in
just seems to punish all the wrong people
and eventually

We find relief ..... in clarity like the sea
It could wash away worlds of people

but somehow leaves you to float to shore

like a miracle

love it J

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the kind words, RS.

j.