renting amen's without saddles

renting amen's without saddles

 

 

 

pray for the transient lovers

they never stay in one heart for very long

always that urge to run

to find a new town to cry in

or laugh in

and a significant other willing

to let them move in with a temporary lease

 

on life's affections

 

pray for the transient lovers

surprisingly settled for emotional nomads

 

they take a drag on the Camel

and then ride off to the sands of change

emptying their canteens of emotion,

 

then dying of a thirst for acceptance.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/29/16

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

Haha as I read it just lovers passing through you heart moving on nothing to serious as they try to find themselves in another Jacob's clever write:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, andrew.

j.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Transient ... staying for a short while and moving on, ever searching for something they rarely ever find.

"they take a drag on the Camel
and then ride off to the sands of change
emptying their canteens of emotion"

This is brilliance personified!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and you are so kind with your review, Linda Marie.

j.