Breakfast Anomaly

Breakfast Anomaly 

filaments of morning

foggy etchings of yesterdays

float in my cereal,

Alphabets that keep spelling out your name

with every spoonful of breath

i inhale.

erin-cilberto

1/27/16

Reviews

[dan]

**Proposed Alternate Title** "The Alfa-Bit Soup" (no charge for that) It always amazes me how you can take an innocuous topic like a bowl of alphabet cereal and twist it into a love story etc. One reason why you have books for sale on Amazon and I don't? Could be. Very nicely done, as usual. take care...dan

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are kind with your words, dan...thank you...ah ha. on the title...would be a good one...
have a great weekend.

j.

[Insight "MH"]

A lovely morning breakfast of memories that seems to last with every sunrise. The simple details that make a whole picture to emerge.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Insight.
j.

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome.

[...]

Bringing deeper meaning to "we are what we eat"...as we live and breathe. For you, it's all poetry, Jacob :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind thoughts, lynn...you are always so encouraging to me...

j.

[Gee]

I'd love to be able to give some insightful,eye opening review but I'm afraid beyond me that is.I always enjoy reading your works,more often than not they fly straight over my head, and you are unaware I've called because of this.Anyway,that said I enjoyed the read and will no doubt be back for further meals.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

stop in anytime, we have plenty of food in the cupboard and fridge.

thank you for the kind words, Gee.

and really just read them as you will...whatever you take from them is what you should...there is no right or wrong interpretations of poetry...it is as it speaks to the reader.
j.

[V]

What a nice poem about mornings, habits with references to the day before. Lovely write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for the kind words, Vanessa.
j.

[Gee]

I will,cheers Jacob

[V]

You're welcome. :)

[alifeacoustic]

Those foggy etchings of yesterdays....What a wonderful line Jacob. Evokes memories of the sweetness of the taste those thoughts once held, yet a warning to sniff the milk before pouring.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, alife.

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

time to scramble some eggs and bacon ... or switch to Kix ... no more anomalous spelling spirits ;) ..just a bunch of balls .... bruahahahahaha!
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i used to love Rice Krinkles but they don't make them anymore...yes, maybe eggs...:)
thank you, my friend.

[Einstein Noodle]

love and peace brofessor :)) i enjoy your poems very much .. you have a wonderful gift built on education and persistence ... at least that is my impression .. glad you are here .. never heard of rice krinkles ... will have to go a googlin'

[Einstein Noodle]

ps .. too cool
http://www.mrbreakfast.com/cereal_detail.asp?id=314

[Zugzwang]

I think we eat the same brand of cereal.
I would like to change it
But know that it's
Impossible.
Great write, my friend.
Z.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that brand keeps showing up in our cupboard.

thank you,
j.

[Carolynn]

Oh sounds like breakfast overload :) stir those alphabets around and maybe they'd spell relief :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i wish...thank you Carolynn for the read and giving me a smile.

j.