Animosity

 

Animosity

 

 

livid sky,

torrential anger

tears of madness attack

in a flood of raining rancor

 

and we wonder,

what we did to displease her so.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/24/16

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

A bad weather day in emotions. Edgy, crisp in its implications of anger while our friend wonder seek the plateau of understanding.

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you so much for your constant support and kind reviews, Al.

j.

[Érenn]

Your welcome ^^

[Alfred Kukitz]

You are welcome. Saw the movie Race last night. Good flick!

[Érenn]

Mother nature sure has a way to vent her frustrations. But then again we are to blame for creating them. I feel that there is another way of looking at it. Something tells me there is someone suffering and time is definitely needed for that someone to heal, but until then one bears all the antics he/she puts up, the latter still trying to figure what he/she/they did wrong. This is another way i see it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like your interpretation of this, Errenn...and thank you much for your words,

j.

[Nisreen]

Watching someone suffer
its not easy

figuring there is no save

but time i guess

this is beautiful

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind words,

j.

[Norman 223]

Floods of tears, faces of thunder, stormy outbursts. They are all there in your metaphorical inferences.
Or, have I read it the other way round.

Norman

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like how you read it...

your weather works for me...thank you for your insights, Norman.

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

she strikes were she will ...the wind blows and we know not from where it comes ... so the Bible says ... Mother Nature is as dispassionate as macadam ... and mobsters ... nothing personal ... just a bit of business ... strong personifications says i! paints a whole other picture than rosy sunsets and bursts of sunrise ... and as a person in relationship ..the eggs shells walked on can be more like pumice after the blow .. either way ..for men ....sad to say ... there is no understanding that will do ;}
E.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh yes, that Godfather thing...and will she drop the gun but take the cannoli...?
thank you for your insightful words, E.

j.

[Einstein Noodle]

yes ...lets hope its the cannoli!! ... savory, sweet, just the right bit of flaky ;) .. the world inside my head is tempest enough :}

[Aura Devour]

This is quite ambiguous, nice work.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

appreciate you words, Aura.

j.

[Zugzwang]

Ahhh, I know I've been there.
My flimsy umbrella always proved thoroughly inadequate to the task.
But flowers sometimes did the trick.
I loved the metaphor.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

your reply is a poem in itself...thank you Zeitnot..

j.

[Zugzwang]

Hahaha!
You are too kind as always.
Thanks for reviewing my review!

[Carolynn]

Perhaps some sandbags of love could soak it up :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

great metaphor, my friend....thank you.

j.

[Carolynn]

Smiles over miles :)

[A hare off]

It's not nice to fool with mother nature or any of her offspring or... Great short piece Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, A hare...time for some Chiffon...

j.