Beautiful. We all have regrets in life and somehow these regrets define our lives.
' when you could have been the comet
shooting across my sky
making me relevant. ' -- these lines were wonderful and touched my heart.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
thank you for your kind words, Exquisite Eyes...
j.
Life is full of regrets and what ifs. But like the title says it's the space between that matters.
A moving piece with (as usual), excellent metaphors
bill
Does someone else make us relevant? Shouldn't be that way, but it is. Regrets....we all have them. Truth is, we often see the past through rose-colored glasses. I liked the celestial metaphor here. Lydi**
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..