a flurry of ink

a flurry of  ink

 

 

 

first thought of you

interrogative,

questions, if approached, asked for a moment

would the answer be yes?

would you just laugh?

would i feel like a fool?

 

then the second thought,

declarative,

i don't care; the question will be posed

and if she says no, i supposed

i would rephrase the question

 

third thought, 

exclamation,

wow, she smiled at me!

i can't believe she said yes!

i might love her forever!

and then,

 

final thought,

imperative,

Be still my heart.

Take your time.

Move slowly.

Listen to her heart.

 

then write the essay

with reckless abandon.

 

 

 

11/25/15

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Now I know what to get you for Xmas, ink. Aside from that I would say you are this is another fine work.

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Al.
j.

[gabrielle]

Enjoyed reading this. The piece could be descriptive of the writing process or the stages of starting a relationship. Persistence truly pays off :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, could be either...my mind sometimes goes in several directions at once.
thank you for your kind review, gabrielle...

j.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

It's funny how the mind can write a whole symphony in a moment. Your "flurry or ink" certainly composed one. I love the expectation, the nervousness, and joy within this piece. Wonderful!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Linda Marie...
j.

[annalysiar]

Lovely words very good write

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, annalysiar..

j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... I enjoyed your light-hearted
poem. Love is best expressed with abandonment
when the stars are aligned. truly, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Pat.

j.

[Ayvid N]

Wow! The thought process is expressed amazingly. This is an outstanding poem for me.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, DIVYA...

j.

[B. Boileau]

Love the thought process... both figuratively and literally !
Makes me wonder about the essay...
A delightful piece

bill

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Bill...

j.

[Corset]

Happy to be the first to review this wonderful piece of romantic writing, I love the flowers!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Corset!

j.