about love

about love

 

 

 

holding hands,
butterfly kisses, sappy things
tingle,
when awkward love mingles
and the green so serene
outcomes, inflated dreams
catastrophe not a thought
distant disentanglements

new day
new way
that smile is real,
time to believe

sappy things
could lead to happy things

time to believe

i'm all in...

 

 

everything heart.

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/5/15

Reviews

[Lily Finch]

Wow.. What a love rhyme......
Love to reading it again and again......

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lily.

j.

[rubie]

after painful heartbreak, it's tough to see brightness and happiness can be in one's future, but this piece reminds us that where there is life, there is hope, and where there is hope, there could be love again....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, rubie

j.

[Alisa Js]

As a fellow romantic soul, I can totally relate to this one.

Thanks for sharing.

Alisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Alisa...

j.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Sweetness isn't just for young. Our hearts may not beat like the hummingbirds...but the thirst for nectar remains.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wise words my friend....thank you.
j.

[Dhaye]

I love this...my favorite subject! Everything is possibles with love. It is like you just woke up one day that you are a character of a fairytale...because you believe in love.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Dhaye...

j.

[alifeacoustic]

I like this Jacob. The head warns the heart, but thoughts of the one still linger. Never say never.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, alife...
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You truly engage the senses, Jacob...
" I'm all in...everything heart." What a wow!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Kelly...

j.

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This is so positive, Jacob :) I like this new feeling of yours...awesome poetry, as always!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, lynn.

j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Things I once believed in; unfortunately, one catastrophe after another has taught me otherwise.
It comforts me, though, that such pretty sentiments may still be shared by others.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

me too, on the catastrophes...three divorces later, where this one came from...who knows...a fiction of hope?

[Lydia Shutter]

I liked the happy rhythm and rhyme in this one. Yes, sometimes we just have to leap and believe the safety net will be there. We have to believe next time will be better. Happy to wake up to your poetry this weekend, Jacob. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, my friend...

happy saturday,

j.