Pin-pricked Senryu of the Heart

Pin-pricked Senryu of the Heart

 

 

poem in freezer bag

to save for another day

burned words now useless

 

can't eat them

write them

or recycle them

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

10/25/15

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

I'm amazed at your understanding of human nature and how you sum up things in few. You are talented indeed...:)......................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Sami.

j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:)..................

[andrew mitchell]

Just look out for frost, bites! Nice work J

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew.

j.

[andrew mitchell]

I wonder if the bag will seal in the freshness of this write when it comes out of hibernation!!

[Corset]

ahh, but you CAN heat them up , devour them like warm chocolate and strawberries! Hurt me, beat me, make me write bad checks! lol, loved it.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks for the smile, Corset...

j.

[Corset]

always my pleasure Jacob :)

[Valentine]

Once those words leave our heart or mouth, we cannot take them back. Best to use them up..no freezing. Valentine

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Valentine.

j.

[B]

Some words are left to be erased
gone for life
because in placing them anywhere near our body
we experience pain

Who doesnt steer away from that

[jacob erin-cilberto]

very true words you have spoken, Nisreen....

thank you for the read and insightful thoughts..

j.

[AYVID N]

So aptly described...yet sometimes those words in a freezer bag can be thawed and made to simmer in spice again. It is great to read your eloquent words again.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, DIVYA..
j.