rebirth of yesterday

rebirth of yesterday

 

 

the stretch marks still exist

even after the painful memories

exit the womb of reflection

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

9/12/15

Reviews

[Kelsey Ann]

So many of us are haunted by yesterdays. Great write :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Kelsey,
j.

[Pryde Foltz]

I hear you on this one. You probably don't remember a piece on her I did so long ago … Phantom Gestation … yeah we humans are master at bringing the undead back to life:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Pryde.

j.

[B]

Short and so full of meaning
this write is all about the marks we all live with
Yesterday paved the journey to many tomorrows :)

Really cool
Two thumbs up

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Nisreenaa.

j.

[David Scott]

Hmmm.
I'm reminded of Scripture.
"Can a man enter the womb and be reborn?"
It seems the answers is obviously no, but then again yes, a man, a woman, a thought, or a memory must be reborn to find be fulfilled...
Me likes, me thinks. 😃

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, David.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

This is huge! I think one of your better attempts at the novel. Bravo Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Al....about as much attention span as i have to write a novel.

j.

[rubie]

i love this one so much.

probably one of my favorites of yours recently.

this could be about 9/11, a break-up, or the passing of a loved one.

anyone can relate to this one....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, rubie...
j.

[....................]

i see a poet giving birth to a poem, the stretch marks his reminder of how he carried those swelling thoughts, eventually pushing them with pen into the world...those stretch marks never leave...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like your perspective, FT.

thank you for your words...

j.