heart prints

heart prints

 

 

your slight smile 

only circumstantial evidence

but i don't need much clue

of you,

 

to probe more deeply

into love 

once a cold case

 

now warming 

to symbiotic solution.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/22/15

Reviews

[Mai L Nissen]

Love the title... You say a lot in few words. You express deep feelings yet use language like 'circumstantial evidence', and other allusions to forensics in your description of the progression of these love feelings :) It works well...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Mai.

j.

[rubie]

sometimes (thankfully) it does not take much to warm a heart again, as long as indelible footprints have been left in the soul to begin with.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, rubie...

j.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

The title of this really drew me. :)
Great poem Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Cherry.

j.

[Alisa Js]

As long as we have breath, we have hope.

Well done, you!

Alisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Alisa..

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

Love your work with enjambment on this one:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Pryde.
j.

[Leif]

It is amazing how many times the heart can be resurrected. It's a good thing that it never truly dies, just sleeps.

An interesting point of view, Jacob. It was a pleasure to read.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Leif.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

it seems like a slide unplanned, unannounced just coming into awareness and suddenly its I and Thou. I felt like your poem slipped just like it does in life.

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Al.

j.

[Sheila Kline]

It's okay to be friends and to be friends rather than lovers is better for some relationships, perhaps though not that wanted by one of the two. The smile is a nice gesture, the love never really was that HOT?
Okay, we're gonna be friends - I can see it coming.......LOL
Great write Jacob!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thanks for your insightful words, Sheila.
j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

the muse....heart prints...heart strings...cold cases...absence.....in symbiotic solutions...poetry:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Queenie...

j.

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

They aren't really mine, they are yours! I just repeated what was so true:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Hmmmm.....a love that is no more and suddenly a smile lights the spark all over again. Symbiotic....I believe a lot of relationships fit that description. We use people, but if they use us in return, well, is there a problem with this? Lydi*

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really like this interpretation, Lydi...

j.