Creation's Circumstance

Creation's Circumstance

 

 

 

i met your skin last night

an evolution of chemicals

ignited my heart into fallible explosion

 

and i thought my walls were so perfectly built

a fortress of frozen brick,

but one touch of your mortared invitation

 

my resistance became a flawed effigy

of evasion,

and one body became another became one

 

violent delights

a skyscraper of love

infinitely reaching towards a delighted moon.

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/17/15

Reviews

[rubie]

absolutely beautiful.

the mysteries of the chemistry of attraction and passion never cease to amaze me....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

me too...thank you,, rubie.

j.

[....................]

some people have an uncanny ability to burrow through the thickest walls and melt the coldest hearts... what an image you create in this sensual write...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, FT.

j.

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with veiled references to passion and sensuality. Fantastic metaphor. Lydi**

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Lydi--

jacob