the real dramatic pause

the real dramatic pause

 

 

insightful eyes

dramatic potion in pupil dialect

and i, the student

rioting within the retinal bliss

totally at loss to place words

upon their beauty...

 

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/7/15

Reviews

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i could hear pupils' widening gasps...and what great lines: "and i, the student/rioting within the retinal bliss"...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you FT.

j.

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

Words woven with stunning intricate delicate beauty!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Jane.

j.

[Kelsey Ann]

So beautiful! When you lock eyes with "the one" it is pure bliss and you've captured that feeling in this piece so well.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Kelsey Ann.

j.

[jeannemarie coulter]

excellent word tapestry...stirred my grey matter to feed my mind...thank you

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, jeannemarie...
j.