beyond a reasonable doubt

beyond a reasonable doubt

 

 

escape the monocle of the past

evade evidence that purloins the future

evolve within the present,

 

love is awaiting

to be creating 

symmetry syncopating 

 

when you pirouette within

placate your heart 

probe into hers,

 

with an open mind

happiness could become

an open and shut case

 

 

solved 

by sated

soul mates.

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/1/15

Reviews

[Valentine]

Todays young can't get their thumbs and fingers off of their telephones {texting} to really get to know a member of the opposite sex. Valentine

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ain't that the truth...

thank you, Kathie....

j.

[Cherry Pepperweb]

Love happens when you both see it and believe it at the same time.
I really like this optimistic piece.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Cherry.

j.

[rubie]

i love the first stanza...it's so perfectly crafted and balanced....

this poem shows your exquisite mastery of language.

I think you had some fun with this one for sure...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, rubie.

[zephyr]

A good news piece if ever I heard one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, shinsei.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Love the way you filled this poetry with an unusual vocabulary. Quite a nice piece of work Jacob!

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Al.

j.

[Penlady]

luscious libation this toast to what might!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Penlady.

j.