How is it clarity comes when the senses are blurred.
There could easily be a part two to this one.
Sad -but- Excellent imagery Jacob.
The scene is set for a late night Noir.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
I love film Noir....thank you, Cherrie.
I might have to work on a part two if the reflection .. read moreI love film Noir....thank you, Cherrie.
I might have to work on a part two if the reflection comes more into focus.
j.
Did I just read a rhyme? Must have been my imagination. Reflections in mirrors are great to write about. They seem to look right through us into infinite introspection.
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
Thank you, Bill...yes, they do look back and through us.
j.
Sounds like the words of an affair.
One you don't want to give up.
The love you go back to.
The love you run to.
Posted 7 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
i like your poetic response here, Paul...and am so sorry i never replied to this before...Not sure h.. read morei like your poetic response here, Paul...and am so sorry i never replied to this before...Not sure how i could have been so negligent. Thank you.
j.
Interesting things can take place between two shot glasses ... Or between a man and a woman peering through their shot glasses ... A hint of alcohol induced romance lingers here along with a Tequila scent of booze ...
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..