motoring toward you ( love senryu)

motoring toward you ( love senryu)

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

motoring toward you (love senryu)

 

 

 

i am four wheel drive

trapped in a two wheel body

gunning the engine

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/29/15

© 2015 jacob erin-cilberto


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I am a Rolls Royce
tendered to lusty four winds
passion is my quest...
You are a difficult act to follow...
truly, Pat

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

thank you for your kind words, Pat.

j.
jacob erin-cilberto

8 Years Ago

and those Rolls Royces...are tough to follow...

:)))
Oh I do like this one... I hear the vroom, vroom of September love !

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

thank you, Renee....you are kind.
j.
Renée

9 Years Ago

Back at ya J
Fantastic brevity Jacob as always. i'm glad you didn't say a four wheel cannon!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

thank you, andrew...

j.
Yahoo! Love that gunning the engine thing going on Jacob. I enjoy writing the Japanese forms....the discipline of 17 syllables is a challenge for we "run-at-the-mouth" writers! LOL

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

thank you for your words, Sharon...

i tend to believe in that phrase, "less is more"-.. read more
Miss Sharon

9 Years Ago

Welcome! Always smiling here....well most of the time. ;>)
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Laughing............................................

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

thank you, lynn.

j.
its hell getting old especially when the exhaust pipe is sputtering..

enjoyed this :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

that's funny, thanks Antonio for the smile...
Antonio Valentino

9 Years Ago

funny eh.. tell that to my.. cough cough wife haha
Miss Sharon

9 Years Ago

LOL...yes that IS funny Antonio!
Don't burn out your clutch.

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

i'm not good with love, but i am pretty easy on a clutch...:)))
thank you, Ken.

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careful not to burn out your motor while you race towards the destination.

slow and steady wins the race....

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

when it comes to love, i have never been a good driver...Raymond is better than i....
Should i really be laughing at this? Rather think it could mean this.. or that.. or surely not that! Which- and whatever, tis clever cool and oh so interesting. Makes me smile and that's the best reward for today.

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

laughing is just fine...:)))

thank you, emma...

j.
A better engine in a compact body will have your time saved. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

9 Years Ago

true...thank you Kshitij...

j.

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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