Erin,
Motoring toward you (love senryu). What a happy lighthearted write! I just sat here and felt it's lighthearted message and had to just grin! Thanks for the happy little time in my day. "trapped in a two wheel body: You really gave us all a fantastic poem here! blessings Kathy
The visions this creates, the sounds, and the emotions, it's a wonderful analogy as well as a fantastic metaphor! Short sweet and hard to beat...and best of all a perfect count!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
thank you, Corset...only form poems i ever do...haiku or senryu----they seem natural....
Love the choice of words and the scenery. So I became curious and made my way to the last page and your first poem and I wasn't disappointed yet I actually never thought I'd be, anyways. To be honest, I love your senryu style, I think you should write more of those...Warmest regards
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
i rarely do form except for senryu...but only when i am in that frame of mind---unless it comes natu.. read morei rarely do form except for senryu...but only when i am in that frame of mind---unless it comes naturally it doesn't come out of me...i am more of a conduit than anything else...the words come i put them down, i have to, i feel that is what i am supposed to do...it is fun getting to do this poetry thing, but honestly i can take little credit for what appears on the page---
Senryus are fun to write because they are short---i like brevity.
You took the words right out of my mouth and mind, or in this case, fingers ^^ again. I couldn't agr.. read moreYou took the words right out of my mouth and mind, or in this case, fingers ^^ again. I couldn't agree more with what you said, I think we have a very similar way of thinking.
8 Years Ago
yes, we do! i have noticed that for awhile.
8 Years Ago
I know, we had talked about it before. It's great.
Haha this gave me a good laugh. it's a different feel to the poems i have usually read of yours, maybe it is because of it being a senryu? (i don't think so)
Well it was more than just me laughing, i liked the thought behind or maybe i am just viewing it differently ^^
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
thank you, Errenn....don't do too much form...but have fun with haiku and senryu...
a.. read morethank you, Errenn....don't do too much form...but have fun with haiku and senryu...
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..