motoring toward you ( love senryu)

motoring toward you ( love senryu)

A Poem by jacob erin-cilberto

motoring toward you (love senryu)

 

 

 

i am four wheel drive

trapped in a two wheel body

gunning the engine

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/29/15

© 2015 jacob erin-cilberto


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How fun you made this senryu form Jacob, my smile flowed all over. :D
I know just how you feel as I am in perpetual four wheel drive lol!
You really have a good sense of humor and I am sure you will soon find just the right gear hehe -- thank you for making me laugh and for your great reviews! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words, Sammi,
j.
Nothing worse than no traction- better call AAA.
I hate when love gives me the slip.

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

I called them an hour ago and am still waiting for them to show up...:)))
thank you, Cherrie,.. read more
Well, I hope you don't get a speeding ticket going fast or need high repair bill.
Is it a fancy ride or a cheap one???
Lol...just kidding .
An excellent short Senryu!
.

Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

Me? it's one that is barely running, Sami...:)))
a clunker.
j.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:::::)))))))))))))))
Engines driving wheels
Of binary minds too tired
To race up the quad



Posted 2 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

2 Years Ago

I am still gunning the engine, just not as fast.
thank you, Bill,
j.
I love this little haiku, Jacob. So many emotions in so few words. :)

100/100

Nix ❤️

Posted 3 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

3 Years Ago

thank you, Nix. Actually it is senryu. Haiku is strictly nature but same form as Senryu which can be.. read more
Nix is typing...

3 Years Ago

Ooooh, thanks for explaining!! :)
I enjoyed it :)
Nix ❤️
Thank goodness you are not trapped in a Model T Ford.
I have a Honda Accord sports model... with a Sun Roof
I never use. Good time for a Trade to an electric engine...
smooth running and playful curves to manage.
gently, Pat

Posted 4 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

4 Years Ago

wow, maybe that IS the answer...electric.
thank you, Pat, for the smile.
j.
top gear ... don't blow the engine !

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

thank you , Stella..will try not to.
j.
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Mmmm....I wasn't a fan of love write ups until I'd reached here in wc....
But am loving the love poems a lot now!

These three lines are fervently penned...hope you'll catch your love soon....Oh! You might have already done that and enjoying life with her ;)
Be blessed :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

5 Years Ago

thank you for your kind review, Tahsin...
j.
Even in the beginning you were a love machine...go figure ;p

Posted 6 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

6 Years Ago

maybe poetically speaking....but not otherwise...ha ha.....but thanks.
j.
I love senryu too
and this one was exemplary
full throttle my friend

N

Posted 7 Years Ago


jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

thank you, N.
j.
Neville

7 Years Ago

Again, my pleasure entirely jacob, N

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jacob erin-cilberto
jacob erin-cilberto

Carbondale, IL



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Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..

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