How fun you made this senryu form Jacob, my smile flowed all over. :D
I know just how you feel as I am in perpetual four wheel drive lol!
You really have a good sense of humor and I am sure you will soon find just the right gear hehe -- thank you for making me laugh and for your great reviews! :)
Nothing worse than no traction- better call AAA.
I hate when love gives me the slip.
Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
I called them an hour ago and am still waiting for them to show up...:)))
thank you, Cherrie,.. read moreI called them an hour ago and am still waiting for them to show up...:)))
thank you, Cherrie,
j.
Well, I hope you don't get a speeding ticket going fast or need high repair bill.
Is it a fancy ride or a cheap one???
Lol...just kidding .
An excellent short Senryu!
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Posted 2 Years Ago
2 Years Ago
Me? it's one that is barely running, Sami...:)))
a clunker.
j.
I love this little haiku, Jacob. So many emotions in so few words. :)
100/100
Nix ❤️
Posted 3 Years Ago
3 Years Ago
thank you, Nix. Actually it is senryu. Haiku is strictly nature but same form as Senryu which can be.. read morethank you, Nix. Actually it is senryu. Haiku is strictly nature but same form as Senryu which can be about almost anything else.
I appreciate your visit.
j.
3 Years Ago
Ooooh, thanks for explaining!! :)
I enjoyed it :)
Nix ❤️
Thank goodness you are not trapped in a Model T Ford.
I have a Honda Accord sports model... with a Sun Roof
I never use. Good time for a Trade to an electric engine...
smooth running and playful curves to manage.
gently, Pat
Posted 4 Years Ago
4 Years Ago
wow, maybe that IS the answer...electric.
thank you, Pat, for the smile.
j.
Mmmm....I wasn't a fan of love write ups until I'd reached here in wc....
But am loving the love poems a lot now!
These three lines are fervently penned...hope you'll catch your love soon....Oh! You might have already done that and enjoying life with her ;)
Be blessed :)
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po.. more..