motoring toward you ( love senryu)

motoring toward you (love senryu)

 

 

 

i am four wheel drive

trapped in a two wheel body

gunning the engine

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/29/15

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

You more of the Harley type I thought
A bit of a loner with a side car in case
Great write

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that side car holds fun people.
thank you, Julie,
j.

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Jacob,

Most profoundly thought provoking and meditatively contemplative in subtlety's all too true realities ...

Marve

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Marve,
j.

[Ciara]

4 wheel desire, 2 wheel speed.
I'd say that's about right. These things should be savoured, not rushed.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Can't believe it has been almost 8 years since I wrote this one...thanks for bringing it back to life, Ciara,
j.

[Ciara]

It was my pleasure. I'm glad I found it. 🙂🖤

[Desert Knave]

Sometimes we really need to try to kick in the other gear and get motoring. Nice write. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Jim,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

My thoughts here J, are the mind is willing, but the flesh is weak or maybe it's the other way round the flesh is willing but the mind is weak. Whatever, love is strange and it can't be engineered.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like that, Chris...it can't be engineered...
so true,
thank you,
j.

[Red Brick Keshner]

Love moves the world and becomes all-terrain, against its standard stock and often without regard for all and sunder. Powerful!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Fredrick,
j.

[Ada]

Double meaning here, since this could be a bike or it could be erotica; the writer is left to ponder...title is also love senyru so. Interesting

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your read and words, Ada,
j.

[M. J. Smith]

That, my friend, is why I prefer mountain bikes and woodland trails. Love is best found off the beaten path.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

in places we never expect, thank you, M.J.
j.

[JE Falcon]

Nice! --- But you're going to have to let the clutch out sooner or later. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

afraid so, thank you, JE,
j.