motoring toward you ( love senryu)
A Poem by
jacob erin-cilberto
motoring toward you
(love senryu)
i am
four wheel drive
trapped in a two wheel
body
gunning the engine
erin-cilberto
7/29/15
© 2015 jacob erin-cilberto
Reviews
You more of the Harley type I thought
A bit of a loner with a side car in case
Great write
Posted 1 Year Ago
1 Year Ago
that side car holds fun people.
thank you, Julie,
j.
Jacob,
Most profoundly thought provoking and meditatively contemplative in subtlety's all too true realities ...
Marve
Posted 1 Year Ago
Jacob,
Most profoundly thought provoking and meditatively contemplative in subtlety's all too true realities ...
Marve
1 Year Ago
Thank you, Marve,
j.
4 wheel desire, 2 wheel speed.
I'd say that's about right. These things should be savoured, not rushed.
Posted 2 Years Ago
4 wheel desire, 2 wheel speed.
I'd say that's about right. These things should be savoured, not rushed.
2 Years Ago
Can't believe it has been almost 8 years since I wrote this one...thanks for bringing it back to lif.. read more Can't believe it has been almost 8 years since I wrote this one...thanks for bringing it back to life, Ciara,
j.
2 Years Ago
It was my pleasure. I'm glad I found it. 🙂🖤
Sometimes we really need to try to kick in the other gear and get motoring. Nice write. ~Jim
Posted 2 Years Ago
Sometimes we really need to try to kick in the other gear and get motoring. Nice write. ~Jim
2 Years Ago
thank you for your words, Jim,
j.
My thoughts here J, are the mind is willing, but the flesh is weak or maybe it's the other way round the flesh is willing but the mind is weak. Whatever, love is strange and it can't be engineered.
Chris
Posted 2 Years Ago
My thoughts here J, are the mind is willing, but the flesh is weak or maybe it's the other way round the flesh is willing but the mind is weak. Whatever, love is strange and it can't be engineered.
Chris
2 Years Ago
I like that, Chris...it can't be engineered...
so true,
thank you,
j.
Love moves the world and becomes all-terrain, against its standard stock and often without regard for all and sunder. Powerful!
Posted 2 Years Ago
Love moves the world and becomes all-terrain, against its standard stock and often without regard for all and sunder. Powerful!
2 Years Ago
Thank you, Fredrick,
j.
Double meaning here, since this could be a bike or it could be erotica; the writer is left to ponder...title is also love senyru so. Interesting
Posted 2 Years Ago
Double meaning here, since this could be a bike or it could be erotica; the writer is left to ponder...title is also love senyru so. Interesting
2 Years Ago
thank you for your read and words, Ada,
j.
That, my friend, is why I prefer mountain bikes and woodland trails. Love is best found off the beaten path.
Posted 2 Years Ago
That, my friend, is why I prefer mountain bikes and woodland trails. Love is best found off the beaten path.
2 Years Ago
in places we never expect, thank you, M.J.
j.
Nice! --- But you're going to have to let the clutch out sooner or later. :)
Posted 2 Years Ago
Nice! --- But you're going to have to let the clutch out sooner or later. :)
2 Years Ago
afraid so, thank you, JE,
j.
first
prev
1
Stats
1425 Views
46 Reviews
Added on July 30, 2015
Last Updated on July 30, 2015
Author
jacob erin-cilberto Carbondale, IL
About
Originally from Bronx, NY, I live in Carbondale, Illinois...teach English at a community college and have been writing and publishing poetry since 1970. I am here to read for inspiration from other po..
more..
Writing
Related Writing
People who liked this story also liked..