A Screaming Mute

A Screaming Mute

A Poem by erframan
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About a witness called "traffic light"..

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Like every past morning
I say "Red"
And those tires screeching

Yesterday I was fixed by an oily-haired guy
Why? I lost my tears..
A truck passed without looking at my glaring eye
Snatched five laughter of school peers

Today I prayed before I say "Red"
My rutinity, watching everyone who waits still
Today that tall old man wears a beret
And, oh la la! There's a new guy holding an elegant limousine wheel

My brother's turn to say "Green"
Green, so those engines waving goodbye
Well haha what a beautiful, that limousine
Okay, now it's mine

"Red!"
Ah, no! Why that car not slowing down?
I scream, "RED!!!"
I'm desperately squeezing the ground
"RED!! YOU RETARDED!!"

Then..
1 2 3, and..
I heard a crash again...

I start crying.. Again..
And maybe tomorrow I'll be fixed.. Again..

© 2014 erframan


Author's Note

erframan
Please ignore the grammar problems and I'm open to critic. Thank you and enjoy :)

image source: http://dreamsnest.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/02/traffic-light.jpg

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I was able to connect myself with the writing which probably was enjoyable, it's amazing..keep writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


erframan

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much zZeal, glad you can enjoy it.. Yap, you too, keep writing ;)
zZeal

9 Years Ago

Good writers are always welcomed :)
Nice humour .

Posted 9 Years Ago


erframan

9 Years Ago

Oh thanks for the review RedHeart :) but, sorry I want to ask you in which part you found it humorou.. read more

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Added on December 4, 2014
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Bandung, Indonesia



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