Leave Or Not?

Leave Or Not?

A Poem by erframan
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It's a song about a girl's world when she started to feel that this boy she loves just hanging her feelings and no intention to move further about their relationship.

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Verse 1:

How could I tell the truth?
Behind these heart and eyes
I always wish I could
Break the ice wall among us
And I could get into your world


Verse 2:

Your love, your crush, et cetera
Flying randomly in my head
I couldn’t say to you “Goodbye”
While you’re locked in my heart
Do I appear in your eye?


Pre-chorus:

I realize it’s too late
I’m between love or hate
Like a child between trick or treat
Reveal all mistakes I’ve made


Chorus:

Everything now’s up and down
My love, my heart flying round and round
You’re playing or you’re trying
‘Cause your response disappear and come
I used to say “He loves me, he loves me not”
Now I say “I leave him, I leave him not”
Leave or not, leave or not
Oh boy! You make me dizzy!


(the song genre can be slow-rock or pop) ;)

© 2014 erframan


Author's Note

erframan
Enjoy and I'm sorry if there are mistakes in the language. ;)

(image source: http://images.fineartamerica.com/images-medium-large/girl-on-a-bicycle-linda-scott.jpg)

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that would do a great song, beautifully written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

erframan

10 Years Ago

Oh thank you very much, really appreciate it :)

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erframan
erframan

Bandung, Indonesia



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