White Shades
A Poem by
Eric Cox
Earth's evil reign decayed God let loose the White Shades Enforcers of justice shielding blades glow and hiss As each white blade flashes evil bleeds to ashes Earth's evil reign decayed God let loose the White Shades Angel spectres sheer white eyes glow with holy light Evil's sensed in the air cut down by blades aflare Earth's evil reign decayed God let loose the White Shades They will silence dark crime throughout eternal time Evil cut to its' soul for thou the death bells toll Earth's evil reign decayed God let loose the White Shades The White Shades now command light and peace flood the land the end to never come the White Shades' death swords hum
© 2012 Eric Cox
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A very powerful storyline in your poem. Brings to mind the battle of good verses evil. Your descriptions and storytelling ability shine in this tale of God's Angels fighting the forces that would destroy mankind, His special creation. Outstanding writing Eric!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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"Earth's evil reign decayed, God let loose the White Shades" Repetition of these lines bring power to your very lyrical poem. Outstanding work! Very visual- Reminds me of the battle of the angels of light and darkness with Michael.
Posted 12 Years Ago
"Earth's evil reign decayed, God let loose the White Shades" Repetition of these lines bring power to your very lyrical poem. Outstanding work! Very visual- Reminds me of the battle of the angels of light and darkness with Michael.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thank you for the kind review!
A very powerful storyline in your poem. Brings to mind the battle of good verses evil. Your descriptions and storytelling ability shine in this tale of God's Angels fighting the forces that would destroy mankind, His special creation. Outstanding writing Eric!
Posted 12 Years Ago
A very powerful storyline in your poem. Brings to mind the battle of good verses evil. Your descriptions and storytelling ability shine in this tale of God's Angels fighting the forces that would destroy mankind, His special creation. Outstanding writing Eric!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This work fills the page with eternal depth... the vastness and scope of all that is good at war with the shadows of pain and suffering. Powerful!
Posted 12 Years Ago
This work fills the page with eternal depth... the vastness and scope of all that is good at war with the shadows of pain and suffering. Powerful!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Creative and positive in nature. There is always hope if you have faith.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Creative and positive in nature. There is always hope if you have faith.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Theses very well could be Guardian Angels sent by God to earth to help protect His special creations, us! Awesome poem! Very positive indeed!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Theses very well could be Guardian Angels sent by God to earth to help protect His special creations, us! Awesome poem! Very positive indeed!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
There is always hope as long as we believe. I love your positive and hopeful story in your poem. Amazing poem!
Posted 12 Years Ago
There is always hope as long as we believe. I love your positive and hopeful story in your poem. Amazing poem!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
wow i like this. the mighty guardians of God's army. well written.
Posted 12 Years Ago
wow i like this. the mighty guardians of God's army. well written.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
A powerful poem. Like a story of myth in your words. Angels to cause destruction to man waste and craziness. Artwork and words were amazing. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
A powerful poem. Like a story of myth in your words. Angels to cause destruction to man waste and craziness. Artwork and words were amazing. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
Nicely done. I like the myth feel of this, like something out of an ancient book. God's good angels will come and save our world. Very enjoyable poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nicely done. I like the myth feel of this, like something out of an ancient book. God's good angels will come and save our world. Very enjoyable poem.
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on June 12, 2012
Last Updated on June 18, 2012
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Eric Cox Hollow Woods, OR
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I've been writing since 1984.
I write poems, stories, lyrics & string haikus in a variety of genres: Horror, Nature, Inspirational, Comedy, Sexual, etc... Variety is what you will find here.
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