Crystal Raindrops

Descending endlessly
crystal drops of beauty
soothing tears of the sky
crystal beauty to never dry?
Crystalline drops streak past my window
a burst of sun sets the rain aglow
the soothing cascade blooms a sigh
the tranquil pitter patter never die
keep echoing your teardrop breeze
sunlit upon the forest trees
set aglow through the window panes
gazing upon the crystal sun rain
Cascading endlessly
crystal drops of beauty
soothing tears of the sky
crystal beauty of endless sighs

Reviews

[Leslie Philibert]

Eric is a fine poet who can record what he sees and feels - good one.

[Eric Cox]

Thanks

[zainul]

Wonderful imagery and metaphors.
I am impressed by "crystal drops of beauty"
I feel sooooooooooooooo happy.
Such a lovely Crystal Raindrops!!!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! Much appreciated.

[zainul]

You are always welcome,talented poet.

[rabbit]

has the soothing/melancholy elements of rainy days, but with a nice cheerful twist. nice.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[Black Cat Fever]

I love this poem. Just like all of nature, rain as many moods. I spotted at least a couple here. Great work!

[Star Wolf]

Truly extraordinary and impressive writing. Your words are beautiful and spellbinding. Really awesome writing.

[An owl on the moon]

Stunningly brilliant... there is a movement and flow of crystal glimmers that stirs the senses... Beauty beyond measure.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A very creative, beautiful and enchanting poem. Your rhyming is excellent as well as the rhythm. I really like this poem. Nicely done!!!!

[Tina Kline]

A very beautiful and soothing image of rain. I noticed a touch of melancholy in your words. It helped to enhance the depths of this poem. This is outstanding work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your description of the rain. Create good visions and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautiful here Eric. You paint a lovely picture here. Those rain drops are crystal like and very beautiful. The imagery here is fantastic.