An encounter with squirrels with a taste for human meat.
I went to the park one day I walked along the pathway large trees stood nearby so blue was the sky I whistled happily a carefree day I saw squirrels nearby I joyfully said hi I kept walking along whistling a song the squirrels began to follow me chittering noisily I had no food to give them and my mood began to dim too late I realized my fate I ended up on their dinner plate then they took bits of me to their home they collect human flesh for when winter is known beware of these squirrels, they have a taste for human meat you will feel the agony of being consumed once their slicing teeth greet
A good poem to remind us that what seems innocent and sweet isn't always that way. We can be fooled. And this reads as excellent horror too. All seems innocent and peaceful, just out enjoying yourself, the woods and the cute squirrels and they attack. I think that what seems innocent and turns out not to be makes for good horror. Who would be worried about squirrels when out in the woods? Not me! Good job on this Eric.
A good poem to remind us that what seems innocent and sweet isn't always that way. We can be fooled. And this reads as excellent horror too. All seems innocent and peaceful, just out enjoying yourself, the woods and the cute squirrels and they attack. I think that what seems innocent and turns out not to be makes for good horror. Who would be worried about squirrels when out in the woods? Not me! Good job on this Eric.
I found myself laughing wether this was the writers intention or not. What a dark and sinister twist on quite an innocent looking creature, loved teh imagination behind it. Brilliant idea
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I love your rhymed piece.
Would you tell me why you painted your b.. read moreYou are most welcome.
I love your rhymed piece.
Would you tell me why you painted your beloved squirrel as a carnivorous animal.So far I know they feed on herbs and thus called herbivorous animal.
However,I feel for a poetic thing it is ok.
Very enjoyable piece.
12 Years Ago
Thanks. I do horror pieces sometimes. I love squirrels and other critters.
12 Years Ago
Yea,I understand and enjoy.
But,would it create any bad impression about squirrels in the mind.. read moreYea,I understand and enjoy.
But,would it create any bad impression about squirrels in the minds of children?
I hope the squirrels stay peaceful. A lot of them roaming the Detroit area. I like the story. Squirrels know who had food and who are a waste of time. Thank you for the amazing poem.
Coyote
I've been writing since 1984.
I write poems, stories, lyrics & string haikus in a variety of genres: Horror, Nature, Inspirational, Comedy, Sexual, etc... Variety is what you will find here.
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