Blue Bird

Blue bird in the tree
you are wild and free
what is flying like, it has to be fun
soaring free in the summer sun
flying about in the open air
you can go anywhere
how I wish I were thee
flying so free,
blue bird in the tree
shed a tear for me.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Would be nice to be able to fly away at will. I like the desire in the poem. A very good ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Susie Q]

What a lovely sentiment to a beautiful bird.You always amaze me.

[Rose of Gondor]

Lovely poem. Simply lovely. I loved how you made it rhyme! Especially the last part...thee and free and tree and me....beautiful word choices. The last part made me want to laugh and cry at the same time. Bravo, Ghost! Very, very emotional poem.

[Black Cat Fever]

A very beautiful poem that ends on a sad note I think most can understand. We'd all like to fly away from our lives at some point. I enjoyed your most lovely poem.

[Mehul Rwat]

Wow! Short and beautiful poem. Keep writing!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A very heard and crafted piece of writing, well done, good read.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This has a bittersweet feel to it. Lovely, beautiful yet profoundly sad too. I really enjoyed reading this. You're a great poet!

[Star Wolf]

This is rather tender and sad. Even so, its still beautiful and I love it!

[Tina Kline]

A very lovely poem to the blue bird but with a touch of deep sadness. I really love this.

[Droll Prole]

Pretty. I always wished I was a bird.