Hell Catchers

This is about angelic creatures who watch and drag the evil to Hell.

They are fanged angelic creatures
they are called Hell Catchers
they watch where they sense wrongs climb
and report each crime,
when those who do wrongs die
if the crimes are high
Hell Catchers drag them to Hell
where in such pain they writhe and yell
they pay for the evil they do
their time in Hell never through
flames eating at their blackened souls
beneath them red hot coals,
Hell Catchers can't take them to Hell
until their bodies are empty shells,
they are ghostly white creatures
with wicked angelic features
they will continue catching the evil
dragging them down the celestial hill
where each fiery red flame tortures
they are fanged angelic Hell Catchers.

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

Very spooky and creepy. I don't know what these are but you've created a good mythical creature here! Awesome!

[Black Cat Fever]

Dark and creepy in all the right ways. I can just see one of these things coming and hope it just passes me on by!

[Tina Kline]

These remind me of Grim Reapers except they have a one way ticket. This is a really fantastic chiller. You did an outstanding job on this.

[Sean M. Addams]

a very devilish read ... liked this alot ..imagery was great in this ... overall I thought you did good on this creepy piece .. a very frighting write .. one hell of a job on this one!!