Odd Looking Fellow

Odd Looking Fellow

A Poem by Eric Cox

Your clothes are too bright
they give me a fright
especially your bright yellow
you're an odd looking fellow
with pants of bright green
in the dark you can be seen
with a tie of bright red
and an orange cap on your head
with purple tennis shoes
so many fashion blues
your clothes are too bright
I'm blinded by the sight.

© 2010 Eric Cox


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Would that I be blinded to THAT sight lol. Good imagery . . . I think lol

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maybe this guy just needed to get a little bit of attention & I am sure he always got it with this outfit!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This guy is too loud and does have the fashion blues! I love this, its very creative and delightful!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

HaHa Ha! I like this. Fantastic humor! I can just see this odd looking fellow and it brings to me a chuckle!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This made me laugh. He sure is an odd looking fellow with fashion problems!
Very nicely done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 10, 2010
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Eric Cox
Eric Cox

Hollow Woods, OR



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I've been writing since 1984. I write poems, stories, lyrics & string haikus in a variety of genres: Horror, Nature, Inspirational, Comedy, Sexual, etc... Variety is what you will find here. Copy.. more..

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