Dark Queen

She appeared from out of a mist of black
I took her hand now there's no going back
her shadow shrouds ever near
her black wings so clear
vampire, an ancient dark queen
she haunts my every dream
she turned me, forever night
caught in a web of black light
crimson kisses mark me
she will never set me free
I am chained to her
chained forever.

Reviews

[Star Wolf]

A nice eerie and dark romantic vampire tale. I hope he likes being chained to her side because it seems he doesn't have a choice. Nicely done. I love this!

[Tina Kline]

Very darkly romantic in an eerie sort of way. Nicely written.

[Black Cat Fever]

Darkly erotic and seductive. I really enjoyed the spell the vampire casts in this poem capturing the human and turning them. Nicely done.

[Sean M. Addams]

liked the rhyme in this alot and found it flowed well and rather interesting ..overall nice job on this..