Celestial Beauty

Up above, in the enchanting night sky
a shooting star streaks by
a crescent moon shimmers bright
stars twinkle on this magical night
There's not a cloud in the sky
the winds softly sigh
the beauty that shines tonight
floods my soul with delight
I could gaze at the sky forever
at this celestial treasure
Come outside and gaze up and see
a sky shining with beauty
a beautiful celestial show
which shall forever shine and glow.

Reviews

[Nae Nae]

I'm in love with the stars, the way they glitter as if to wink at you, as if they are trying to say they see you. I love the way they are so free, the way that they have no limits, no boundaries, no cage that they constantly are forced to live in. What you've written here is beautiful, it's the perfect sky on the perfect night. The grammar is not the best I'll say, but the content of Celestial Beauty is so pure and so full I could read it over, and over again.

Nae-Nae...

[Coyote Song]

This is a truly beautiful poem. I love the brilliant and shining sky show your words paint in your poem. Breathtaking and lovely. Very skillfully written and creatively put upon the 'page'. I really enjoyed this one a lot!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)

[Coyote Song]

:)

[crazywritingfreak]

omg that is awesome. i love it. i read it over 5 times.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[Susie Q]

I appreciate how your short poems paint a beautiful picture in our minds. Thank you for this one & keep writing!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Lovely rhyme and flow. Great Job!

[Daniel Gardner]

Nice work. The night sky is a beautiful creation.

[Mason]

I am enamored with stars and astronomy. The universe is so beautiful. I sometimes wish I could leave the suburbs and live in the middle of nowhere; under a sky filled to the brim with stars. Then all I need are infrared and ultraviolet binoculars. Magnificent...
Love the poem. Thanks for sharing!

[deeps]

Simply Amazing! I like this alot.

[Jordan]

It's beautiful the way you wrote this poem.. In my mind's eye, I could easily see the sky that you are describing and it made me smile at the beauty.. Great work!

[Lilly]

very beautiful - captured the night's majesty wonderfully

great piece.

[Star Wolf]

Enchanting and so beautiful.