Vampire Encounter

I walked a lone path one dark Autumn night

when my eyes were entranced by a vision of white

her white leather glowed in the cemetery's ghostly light

her face as white as the moon among the shadows of night

I felt her magic in the air as she drew near

she smiled and icy fangs became clear

I fell under her spell and her fangs sank

my crimson essence of life she drank

then I tasted her sweet blood

and the vampire condition began to flood

now I am hers through the breeze of forever

my new, dark life I will always treasure

we share kisses of blood in the night

we find dark ecstasy in candlelight

our hearts are chained together

our crimson love will bloom forever.

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

A erotic and romantic image of the vampire. This encounter you describe in your poem paints a positive picture, who could ignore the wonderful and seductive lure of this vampire? Who would truly want to turn down immortality? I don't think I would. I enjoyed your fantastic vampire poem a lot. As I read this it kinda went like a song so I think your words here would make a cool vampire song too!

[Eric Cox]

Cool. Thank you!!!!! :)

[Coyote Song]

You're welcome Eric.

[The Cute 1]

i love vampires and such so i love the poem

[R E Tree]

I like vampires. The way they are described is fantastic. This poem made me feel exactly in your shoes. I felt like I was standing in front of a vampire. A male one would suit me as the romantic bit is the best. This was a pleasure to read

[Star Wolf]

A vampire encounter that has a positive ending. Love the vampire imagery in this. Awesome!

[Sean M. Addams]

like the imagery in this alot...a very brillant dark piece... very nicely done!!!

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

muuuuuuuahahahahahahaha love it ....you rock on horror! x0x0x0x

[Tina Kline]

What a great vampire poem! Romatic and
kind of spooky at the same time. Makes
becoming a vampire look real tempting!
Who could resist if its like the way
you write here!

Tina