Angels Sing

Written for the contest "Angels".

The wounds of life cut deep
angels sing her to sleep
tears touch her haunted soul
wings of a dove soothe the hole
she prays each night for soothing peace
"Let the wound within my soul cease"
her kind heart walks with the King
she feels the breeze of angels' wings
her faith cuts through the sorrows of night
the blossom of black can no longer bite
when the wounds of life begin to seep
the beautiful angels sing her to sleep

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

What a wonderful poem! So tender and so full of love and hope. Pain can be healed by our Lord and Savior and God's angels that he sends down to us. The imagery in your poem and its sense of gentleness shines bright in this. It's very inspiring too and I love this. You're so talented!!!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)

[Coyote Song]

:)

[KAREN]

Beautifully written, gives people hope too!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[Leslie Philibert]

The words fit the theme very well, rich, romantic, some great phrases like the blossom of black, with its great alliteration. Like this.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem. Would be good to have the Angels singing for you to allow you to find sleep. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Eric Cox]

Thank you. Much appreciated.

[Tina Kline]

This is very powerful in showing the love of angels and very tender too. It's soothing. I love the imagery in this. You did a creative and skillful job on this poem.

[Eric Cox]

Thanks much!!!! :)

[Tina Kline]

You're so welcome Eric!