Angels Sing

Written for the contest "Angels".

The wounds of life cut deep
angels sing her to sleep
tears touch her haunted soul
wings of a dove soothe the hole
she prays each night for soothing peace
"Let the wound within my soul cease"
her kind heart walks with the King
she feels the breeze of angels' wings
her faith cuts through the sorrows of night
the blossom of black can no longer bite
when the wounds of life begin to seep
the beautiful angels sing her to sleep

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

What a wonderful poem! So tender and so full of love and hope. Pain can be healed by our Lord and Savior and God's angels that he sends down to us. The imagery in your poem and its sense of gentleness shines bright in this. It's very inspiring too and I love this. You're so talented!!!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)

[Coyote Song]

:)

[Stacey Watts]

Very light and beautiful. The words flow delicately and the tone set here is truly ethereal. Nice work.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[An owl on the moon]

A purely haunting lullaby of the divine touch on a soul so weary. Beautiful.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you much!!!!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

The wounds of life cut deep
angels sing her to sleep
tears touch her haunted soul
wings of a dove soothe the hole
An awesome write from an excellent pen...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Eric Cox]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Star Wolf]

Awesome poem! Its so beautiful yet so full of pain.

[Eric Cox]

Thanks!

[Susie Q]

This is beautiful, Eric. It touched my heart just to think I have two more angels who love to sing & I am sure they are in that heavenly choir! This will go into my library.

[Kajal Gulabani]

It is phenomenal. So simple and pure. You never ever disappoint. Classy!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[Black Cat Fever]

Enchanting, magical and very beautiful in spite of the pain written about. Truly inspiring!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[Wolf's Dark Song]

This is a lovely piece of writing, like a jewel.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Pure beauty in this piece!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Welcome!