Crimson Kisses

Dark flames of bliss
come with each crimson kiss

Desire within the shroud of shadows
the essence of the vampire aglow
eyes glowing shifting shades of scarlet red
countless times the flames of blood desire fed

Dark flames of bliss
come with each crimson kiss

Wild passion caressed by a shroud of night
flesh on bleeding flesh lit by candlelight
cold sharp fangs piercing crimson veins
the lust for blood ecstasy chains

Dark flames of bliss
come with each crimson kiss


Blood feeds the black soul of Nosferatu
through the sands of eternity to brew
the bind of love soothes the black desires which cage
look deep into our eyes and let our essence turn the page

Dark flames of bliss
come with each crimson kiss

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

A very vivid and brilliantly written vampire poem. It's erotic, sexy and chilling at the same time. Rather spellbinding. The reader can't help but be pulled in by the vampires dark enchantment. I'd love to hear this to some sort of dark enthralling music! Fantastic write Eric!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!! :)

[KeeD]

I'm facinated by the color red. Always have been since I was a kid. Something about it screams elegant yet brutal. This piece was so amazing and mesmerizing. Specially the lines, "countless times the flames of blood desire fed" & "flesh on bleeding flesh lit by candlelight" had such a raw impact, hooked me right in, made me urge the sinister crimson kiss. Good write, this is dark and erotic at the same time.

[Eric Cox]

Thanks!

[Rob Santana]

Dark passion, the lust for blood ecstasy chains,awesome wording there. Great write Eric..

[Eric Cox]

Thanks!

[Sean M. Addams]

Awesome vampire piece. Imagery was perfect in this..great job

[Star Wolf]

A very hot, sexy and lethal vampire poem. Erotic and dangerous. This would be a great song, I agree.

[Eric Cox]

Thanks!! :)

[Black Cat Fever]

A very chilling and sexy poem/song. I really enjoyed this darkly romantic write.

[Eric Cox]

Thank you!!

[An owl on the moon]

What a dark, flowing music sings forth from your words... That haunted beauty that devours all light... Rich and deep.

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Cool song. Very erotic and chilling. I love this!

[Eric Cox]

Thanks!

[Tina Kline]

Wow, very impressive write! I really love this, its dark and sexy and sultry and sensuous and spooky at the same time. It would make a perfect song too! You did an outstanding job on this poem!

[Eric Cox]

Thank you! :)