The Most Dangerous Game Alternate EndingA Story by e.renoldiAn alternate ending to Richard Connell's short story, The Most Dangerous Game The
cold waves splashed across Rainsford’s face as he struggled to keep his head
above the water. He quickly glanced around, noticing he had just barely made it
alive. While keeping himself afloat, he looked up to the shore from where he
had jumped. There was no sign of the general, Ivan, or the hounds. He
cautiously navigated his way around the rocks and swam further out into sea.
Before he had gotten too far, he spotted a small cave just below the shore
wall. Once Rainsford reached the cave, he sat down upon a large, mossy rock at
the opening of the cave. He could see from the sunlight outside that the cave
was small and full of rocks and little pools of salt water. As
he sat there on the rock, he shuffled possible plans though his head. He could
try to swim further out and find another island; but it would be highly
unlikely to find another island before sundown. He could swim back onto shore
and hide among the trees once more; but the general’s pack of dogs would easily
sniff him out there. Rainsford jumped as he felt a large drop of water splash
onto his shoulder. He suddenly had a remarkable idea. He slowly slid off the
rock and stepped into one of the small pools scattered around the cave. The afternoon
sun reflecting off the sea revealed a flat area near the end of the cave. I
will stay in this cave for the night, thought Rainsford. I felt his pockets for
any amount of food left. He sat down in anguish realizing that everything but
his gun and a few bullets had been spared from his desperate escape into the
sea. He wondered if General Zaroff would think to look here. As
night fell, the cave became chilly and Rainsford’s clothes were still damp. He
was freezing, but at least he would be safe for the night. He laid down to rest
and fell asleep to the lull of the ocean’s music. Rainsford
awoke to the salty taste of sea water splashing in his mouth. He rolled over
spitting out the remaining water and looked out the mouth of the cave. He
assumed it was mid-morning seeing as the tide was not quite high. The
barks of the hounds echoed all around him. Rainsford quickly gathered himself
and peeked out of the cave. He heard the dogs again; they seemed to be right
above him. “Ivan,” General Zaroff spoke loudly over the
crashing waves, “He his alive, I’m sure such a marvelous hunter wouldn’t let
the elements distill him. Rainsford has certainly proved to be such great
game.” Rainsford could hear the general smile through his
red lips and sharp teeth. It was silent for a moment; I van was most likely
signaling something to the general. “Oh I do not fear for my success,” the general
began again, “For we still have one day left for the hunt and he must be down
the cove somewhere. Send down the dogs.” It was another moment until Rainsford began to
react to General Zaroff’s commands. Rainsford rushed out of the cave and swam
quickly as close as he could along the shore. Over the rumbling sea, he heard a
large splash. He spun around in the water. He felt his heart rate increase
rapidly as he spotted three large hounds coming towards him. Rainsford swam and
swam until he could hardly feel his arms. The dogs weren’t in his sight, but
they were close enough. It
wasn’t until the late afternoon that Rainsford came upon an area of shore line
he could climb onto. He lied down on the sand and caught his breath. He heard
more barking and he knew he had to get moving. He jumped up and ran, this time
to find a place to hide on the shore. He hectically covered his footprints with
a large leaf near by. Then, he ran into the beginning of the jungle so as not
to lead a trail, and kept running. It
wasn’t long until Rainsford found a very large tree. It was the largest tree he
had ever seen. Without any hesitation, he hooked himself up onto a branch and
climbed to the middle. There was a huge opening inside the tree, but there was
no was for prying eyes to spot him here. With his stomach most hungry and his
arms wobbly, he sat in the tree and spent the night in the comfort of its trunk. Rainsford snapped his head up. It was late into the
night for now the stars were shining brightly above him. He heard a stick break
somewhere below the tree. He cautiously looked down. And much to his surprise,
he saw General Zaroff smiling at him. Rainsford began to think the worst when
the general spoke. “Sanger Rainsford of New York,” he smiled widely,
“I have hunted many, and I have been successful in all my game. I thought I had
the wits and skill to hunt you, but you have been the most dangerous game.” Rainsford cried out in joy as General Zaroff threw
his gun at the trees base and surrendered. © 2016 e.renoldi |
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